Here is a revised concept for a character I have previously talked about. I wanted to improve upon several aspects, which I detail below.
In the interest of saving time, I will repeat what I said about this on my DeviantArt page.
I wanted to improve upon the previous concept for this character, because it looked bad in a number of key areas:
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Different areas of her body looked squashed and stretched as though I
did a bunch of bad transformation edits, which is mostly true
- Her pose was awkward, especially for her limbs, especially especially for her hands
- Her expression was dumb, and her hair was stupid
While not amazing, I feel that I managed to correct some mistakes and oversights:
- Her body proportions look more balanced
- Her knees don't look as weird, and her hair is less stupid, but her expression is dumber
- She isn't doing anything strange with her hands
I
still can't seem to get the direction she is facing correct for her
entire body; her knees and feet seem to be pointing in wrong directions.
Her skirt is also off, probably worse than in the last version.
Other than this, I made a few simple comics, which can be seen in my DA gallery. Whether they are enjoyable depends on the viewer's taste or lack thereof.
